题型特征剖析
历年中考作文需要字数不少于60个词，题目总是有3个左右guides 提示，考生基本可以参考有关提示列出较明确的提纲；内容可以侧重议论，也可以夹叙夹议；
近几年写作中纯记叙或者纯议论的文章渐渐淡出大家的视线，多为由叙引议，叙议结合的夹叙夹议文。如此的出题模式对于学生来讲无疑增加了非常大的困难程度，怎么样非常不错的把握夹叙夹议的作文？下面让大家层层剖析，揭开这层神秘的面纱。
中考夹叙夹议作文特征剖析与考生"I"生活紧密有关
减少学生依靠写作模板的可能性
关注学生个人的情感表达
3+1的综合写作模式
3= 对三个问题的完整回答
+= 对某个重点问题的扩写
1= 点睛之句的点题和扫尾
典型例题
The most important things in my life
Use the following points as a guide:
l What are the important things in your life?
l Which one do you think is the most important thing?
l Why do you think so?
3个问题
Q1: What are the important things in your life?
Ø Learning to be brave, learning to be confident are the important things in my life.
Q2: Which one do you think is the most important thing?
Ø I think learning to share is the most important.
Q3: Why do you think so?
Ø It enables us to get more ideas or experience from others. It also shows that we have the ability and will to help others.
重点扩写
“Share” is another word for “ exchange with each other”.
点题扫尾
开头： There are always many important things that may happen in our life.
结尾：As a famous saying goes “One flower makes no garden”, so we should learn to share with others.
用习语谚语
平常词语教学中积累习语和谚语:
full ---- Life is full of hope.
gain ---- No pains, no gains.
practice ---- Practice makes perfect.
talent ---- There must be a use for my talent.
indeed ---- A friend in need is a friend indeed.
dull ---- All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
healthy---- Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.
way ---- Where there is a will, there is a way.
learn ---- It’s never too late to learn.
success---- The secret of success is to believe in yourself.
学生作文:
There are many important things in my life, such as my eyesight, my subjects. Now, the most important thing in my life is the test in June. If I do well in it, I will study in a good school, but if I do badly in it, I will study in a school that I don’t want. It’s very important, I think.
点评：内容空泛， 选材俗套，结构不严谨，缺少立意深刻的中心意思的表达。
修改1：
There are always many important things that may happen in our life. Among them, learning to be brave, learning to be confident are the important things in my life. I think learning to share is the most important. “Share” is another word for “ exchange with each other”. It enables us to get more ideas or experience from others. It also shows that we have the ability and will to help others. As a famous saying goes “One flower makes no garden”, so we should learn to share with others.
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修改2：
Life is just like a painting, colorful and meaningful. There are always many important things that may happen in our life.Among them, learning to be brave, learning to be confident are the important things in my life. I think learning to share is the most important.Why do I think so? “Share” is another word for “ exchange with each other”. It enables us to get more ideas or experience from others. It also shows that we have the ability and will to help others.That can help us to have more friends. In my opinion, learning to share is a kind of “life skills”. As a famous saying goes “One flower makes no garden”, so we should learn to share with others. （共119字）
注意
1. 议论性的短文非常重要的是要写好主题句和结尾句。
2. 议论文多用一般目前时。
范本赏析Writing at least 60 words about the TOPic “Things I Hate to Do”
Use the following points as a guide.
u What are the things that you hate to do?
u What do you hate doing most? Why?
There is no denying that everyone has something to hate, so do I. Nothing is more hateable than to do housework, because it makes me feel tired. Another thing I hate to do is travelling with my parents. I always stay with them without freedom. In addition, I don’t like eating vegetables either. They taste terrible ,but my mother always tell me they are good for my health and let me eat. Oh, my God, what should I do?
【评析】
1. 好句型：
1) There is no denying that….
2) Nothing is more than hateable than to do….
3) Another thing I hate to do is….
4) In addition,….
5) are good for….
2. 注意审题， 题目things i hate to do 表示要写几件事，而不是1件；除此之外，虽是hate to do,不能写一些消极的内容。文章内容还可以涉及环保、浪费等话题。
小Tps:
1 在叙议结合的文章中，切记的是叙事的内容不可以大于议论的内容，需要明确由叙事引出议论的内容，中心点在于议论而非叙事。
2 夹叙夹议的文章中所写的事件无需写一些非常大的事件，推荐用的一些故事就是身边发生的，与大伙息息有关的事例，如此愈加贴近生活，愈加真实可信，记住由叙引议，升华主题。
练习：
You must have got some help from someone or something in your life. They have taught you something important. They have encouraged you to go through the most difficult time. Or they have even changed your life. Why not write down your gratitude to them? Please write at least 60 words about the TOPic “ I want to say thanks to my______”. （日常，可能有某个人，某件事，某····帮助过你，鼓励过你，给你带来过一些生活的其实，可能改变了你的生活，又可能····。 为何不提笔写下你对他们的感激之词呢？ 以我想对···说声谢谢为题写一篇不少于60个字的短文，标点符号不占格。）
【参考范本】
范本1
I want to say thanks to my friend
There’s an old saying, ‘A friend in need is a friend indeed.’ During last summer vacation, I had an operation and couldn’t go to school until October. I was rather worried about my study.
However, it was my best friend who took down notes for me. She also reminded me of the key points. I was really grateful to her because I believed that that was what friends are for. Thank you, my friend, for what you did when I needed help.
范本2
I want to say thanks to my father
I’d like to say thanks to my father, who has always been giving, without ever asking for a reward.
It is said that parents are the very first teachers to a child. To me, my father is a great teacher and, at the same time, a sincere friend. Unlike the deep, sweet love from my mother, that from my father is wise, which helps me improve. It’s he who cheers me up when I lose my heart and pushes me forward when I succeed.
I want to say thanks to my father for his love and help, which accompanies me throughout my growth.
